Sunday, February 10, 2019

The Source Sandwich Tutorial, 2

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Using the Source Sandwich Strategy
Internal Content Placement Strategies to Have a Flawless Argument





You have finally found a source that will support the sub-point topic of one of your body-paragraphs. The paragraph—as a whole—will be filled with source sandwiches that properly argue your overall point of the body-paragraph—which stems from the THESIS statement.

Using Sources: Anytime you want to use a source in your body-paragraph content, it must be embedded within a sentence of your own.  This does not mean that it can be wedged between two original sentences of your own.  On the contract.  If you are unable to integrate brief source concepts directly into the content of your own sentence, then you should not use it. 



Outside source content should never simply monopolize a whole sentence in the essay.  These types of sentences are like the Ad-Lib worksheets of years past.  It is as if you have your regular content, and then you used the 'sticker approach' to insert one block of outside content to make the content keep moving along.  Furthermore, these sentences seem to appear out of nowhere as if they were simply “dropped from the sky” in-between sentences of your own.  Source materials must be contained within your own sentences.  


To embed a source into a sentence, you must make the source content part of your own sentence. In addition, the outside source material should be paraphrased or summarized as much as possible for full integration into your own writing content.  Using a direct quote is rarely appropriate unless the specific details presented by the original author cannot be reworded without losing clarity.



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